Secrets can make or break the entire world. I liked your poem. Will you review one of mine? I have 3 different poems.

Powerful. I don't read much poetry, but I can slide this into the rare category of well written ones. Keep it up!

This poem is my favorite so far! This is how i which the world was. This is how i which my life was. Secrets can ruin friendships and relationships which is really sad. So five stars from me!