|Reviews for Scarlet Moon|
| FuZyCHiKeN 1/8/13 . chapter 1
For anyone wondering why a new chapter hasn't been posted in a while and anyone who is new to reading my story, currently, I'm going over my older chapters and doing some revisions and edits. Some things will probably seem a little out of place and there may be some inconsistencies as you go along as I am posting each revised chapter as I finish them. Sorry for any inconvenience :\ but this is to improve what is already here so you can all enjoy it even more.
| FuZyCHiKeN 12/3/12 . chapter 24
Sorry for such a late addition. Finals are coming up in school and I'm being swamped by all the projects and assignments to finish. Once I'm out of school though, I'll be sure to post much more frequently. :)
| maaaaaaaaaaaaddddddddddyyyyyyy 10/25/12 . chapter 8
i like your story but you should watch out for inconsistancies because when the vampire hunter attacks them he doesnt have any weapons but the previous chapter nathan threatens scarlet with his gun
| Noprofile 9/8/12 . chapter 16
Gosh. Ok, that settles it. My statictics say that there is only 1% of a chance that Nathan will make it out of school tomorrow alive. (only 1% 'cause I don't think u want to end the story at this point) Write more!
| Noprofile 8/20/12 . chapter 1
OMG! This is getting more awesome with each chapter! I esspectailly like the lust thing. Please, continue writeing!
| KimbobMakalski 8/19/12 . chapter 2
Ah, I love it. I'm usually not a fan of vampire stories but this has a certian atmosphere about it which makes me want to read more. Keep up the good work!
| FuZyCHiKeN 8/10/12 . chapter 12
Finally found out how to write responses on my own story. That's just how new I am to this site o.O
To Whisperer: I realize I make that error a lot . It's a bad habit of mine while writing. I'll keep doing my best to break out of it but thanks for pointing it out.
To Reaper: There is a special reason as to why the point of view keeps changing ;) For now, just enjoy the story and read them as Nathan's input on certain things.
To Skull: I checked out that game you mentioned and I enjoyed it :) Got real hard on me in the end though, but I guess I can see where you're coming from on how it reminds you of the story.
To Keyel: I wonder where this deja vu feeling is coming from o.O Is it the good deja vu or a bad kind?
To Noprofile: Things will certainly be heating up between Nathan and Night Hour soon enough, and yes, that was the teacher Nathan spoke with in the beginning.
To All: Glad you're enjoying the story and I hope you'll keep reading as I continue to post. New chapters should arrive every Sunday around noon unless I'm delayed. :)
| Noprofile 8/10/12 . chapter 12
Hey! I just noticed that I'm written as Guest and Noprofile! Wow. This is an amazing story with yet another amazing chapter. I'm not suprized. Please keep writing! (Note: Is the teacher Nathan was talking to at the begining of the story the one who die? Oh, I'm loving the Japanize)
| Noprofile 8/4/12 . chapter 11
Sorry I have no profile! But I have been reading your story for the longest time, and I'm so glad you updated! I can't wait until Nathan runs into problems with his old boss...or gets found out. Write more!
| Keyel 7/10/12 . chapter 9
Very interesting story. I'll certainly be rooting for your little pureblood girl (...meh, I guess her familiar's okay, too...)
...For some reason, this story gives me the strangest sense of deja vu...
-Keyel, Blood Child of Vampire Queen Lillian
| Skull 7/10/12 . chapter 9
...Sweet! This story is frickin' epic! You could probably make this into a manga or something, 'specially with all the Japanese stuff.
...This story kinda reminds me of a game I played online called "Immortal Souls: Dark Crusade." You should check it out sometime.
So, yeah. You should update this soon, 'else I might have to come after you :D
-Skull (Crusher), Hunter Rank #22
| Reaper 7/10/12 . chapter 9
Cool story! It's a nice change from all the sappy romance stories that are flooding the internet. I was just wondering...is there any reason for the changing POV? Or did you just feel like doing it that way? I mean, it gives it a unique feel, but I was just wondering if you had a particular reason for doing that.
I give this story a 4/5 so far.
Keep up the good work.
-Peter "Reaper" Nightblade, 1st son of Highslayer Nightblade, Hunter Rank #9
| Whisperer 7/10/12 . chapter 9
Yes! This is the story I've been looking for! I absolutely love this little world you've created. The only error I feel I need to point out is the changing tense. For example:
Past tense: Nathan ran.
Present tense: Nathan runs.
In writing, you should make sure you stick with one.
...Y'know, this story kinda reminds me of that one time...
...Anyways, keep writing! You could probably publish this one day if you wanted.
-Whisperer, Hunter Rank #16
| Guest 7/3/12 . chapter 9
How do u only have tow reviews? Please keep writing, this is so hooky (yeah, that's not a real word, so what?) Write more please?
| Guest 6/30/12 . chapter 8
OH... This is so cliffhangerish! Please update so I don't die of insanity!