Aw! Poor guy; this is sweet though. There is hope which is always a good thing. As always, I loved your choice of words. I loved it and I hope you continue to reveal more. Keep writing! :)

-Shauni

Aw! Poor guy, this is sweet though. There is hope, which is always a goid thing. As always, i loved your choice of words. This has more of a story feel to it, maybe you should turn it into one? Keep writing!

Shauni