|Reviews for Alone|
| Michaela Jolene 5/18/12 . chapter 1
Reading this I had a flash back to Walk Alone by oh some rock band I dont rememeber, any how great poem. Your point, I see.
| Natari Mirumura 5/18/12 . chapter 1
"the day has me long beat,
even before the sun rises.
with the sleepless nights
with my thoughts intruding
with my heart and head broken.
the Demon has won.
because i am alone."
I love those lines 3 Also, the whole poem was just lovely, and you did a great job expressing loneliness. Amazing, keep it up .