Reading this I had a flash back to Walk Alone by oh some rock band I dont rememeber, any how great poem. Your point, I see.

"the day has me long beat,

even before the sun rises.

with the sleepless nights

with my thoughts intruding

with my heart and head broken.

the Demon has won.

because i am alone."

I love those lines 3 Also, the whole poem was just lovely, and you did a great job expressing loneliness. Amazing, keep it up .