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| Reviews for Lagoon Lake |
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   SimranVim 7/24/12 . chapter 12Please tell me yournot giving this one up too! I think you gave up 'Summer with Desmond' too cuz there hasn't been an update and I've been waiting for 2 months. :( |
| Lorana 6/12/12 . chapter 6 Something that's been bothering me... your not capitalizing the first word of every sentence it seems you are only once in a while. You should go back and fix that, simple change. Also if your characters are going to swear why are you using ** it's kinda annoying. If you want them to curse type the word out, if you don't want to just don't have them swear. Just a bit of proofreading would be a good idea before you update the story. As far as the story goes it's interesting. But for example this chapter is confusing you don't introduce Kyle and it's easy to guess that he's her brother; but is he her twin, older younger? (though if he also is a senior he couldn't be in the same grade unless he is her twin or skipped a grade/held back) Everyone else it's fine it was just there were too many questions when you first start talking about him. I'd say in the first chapter you should give more information about her family and why they were forced to move in the middle of their senior year. Just some basic information not anything too much, just so it's less confusing later on. |
| GeminiBlue 6/6/12 . chapter 9 oh wow, so Madison and Conrad sort of had a moment why'd he have to ruin it :( And I can't believe what happened at the end of this chapter, please update I'm dying to know how this turns out. |
| Lalala 6/6/12 . chapter 9 There's a lot of interesting things going on, can't wait for more!(: |
| GeminiBlue 6/4/12 . chapter 7 Oh so Conrad had a little sister thats an interesting twist, this is really good, please update soon! :) By the way your a really good writer, I love your writing style. |
| IridescentSoul 6/3/12 . chapter 5 More please! So good(: |
| IridescentSoul 6/2/12 . chapter 4 Wow...I feel really bad for Madison. I hope something amazing happens to her lol! Keep going, can't wait for more!(: |
| IridescentSoul 5/30/12 . chapter 3 Hey! This story sounds really promising so I hope that you continue it! Can't wait to see where it leads(: |
| bambi eyes 5/30/12 . chapter 3 Hey! This story sounds interesting, I hope you update soon!(: |
| Eleyna Williams 5/19/12 . chapter 1 actually sooooo awesome! more please? I am desperate for more! |
