|Reviews for Hindrance|
| gcpdguy 5/30/12 . chapter 1
It's like I said, your urgency rocks. I think it's also amazing that you can keep rhyme pretty fluid throughout, though as you saw yourself in it, it isn't necessary for the way you move the words. It's such a pressing work, that even the reader doesn't want the interruption to happen, that they want it to continue, even if they're found out. A great balance between want and what others want one to do.