|Reviews for Hunter|
| Saikoro 5/30/12 . chapter 6
Good chapter. Slightly random cliffhanger... Guess I'll have to wait and see what happens!
| Saikoro 5/25/12 . chapter 5
Sorry for any late reviews!
I felt chapter 3 should have been merged with chapter 2. In addition, I felt like they were quite rushed.
Good chapter 4. I would have liked to see a bit of conflict between Jake's team and the Kree, but I am guessing that will come later in the story. It was quite fast paced, and I felt it could have been a bit more descriptive. However, I did enjoy the new characters, and seeing a Jake's cheeky side.
As for the A/N, I don't think you should make Falcon and Jake a yaoi couple. I love how their friendship is developing. I just think the story might be ruined if you took that step.
Looking forward to the next chapter )
| Saikoro 5/22/12 . chapter 3
Chapter 2 was very interesting, love to see how Jake's and Falcon's friendship will change throughout the story. I think I know Jake's secret after reading Chapter 3! ;)
I can't wait to see him when he changes to a werewolf :)
| Saikoro 5/20/12 . chapter 1
Very good start, I am looking forward to see how the rest of the plot pans out. Update soon!