|Reviews for The Story of Olivier Part III|
| Solomon Sia 6/5/12 . chapter 3
Awesome. I always believed somehow that the nephew would forgive him unconditionally. It's interesting that there's such heavy resistance, because I always read earlier that the nephew demonstrated fear, but love for his uncle.
| Solomon Sia 6/5/12 . chapter 2
Awesome. A community of one handed kobolds. Somehow I want Olivier to bump into another restless spirit also seeking amends for chopping the hand off another kobold.
| Solomon Sia 6/5/12 . chapter 1
Yes More Olivier the pitiful!
Obviously you plan your setting carefully. I like how you take the time to build up the feel and emotion in the chapters though the description of the setting.
Can he now see? How does he avoid rocks? I would like more descriptions of Alteng.
Overall, great beginning. Or continuation.
I could have ran away and I would not have to face this confrontation.