| Reviews for The tall dark stranger |
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Tla.N.Harmonee 5/29/12 . chapter 4Aya, at first sounds like she wanted to give in to him, Bastian sounds like a creepy person. Is he African? Well, love it so far, can't wait to see what happens. |
Alaeryel 5/28/12 . chapter 4I am really enjoying this story! Will be watching for more! |
Tla.N.Harmonee 5/28/12 . chapter 3Wow, it was hot in the beginning, but didnt expect that ending. Keep it up. |
Tla.N.Harmonee 5/26/12 . chapter 2Wow this story's starting to heat up, glad you continued. Wanna hear more, keep it up. |
Tla.N.Harmonee 5/23/12 . chapter 1I like the concept of this story, however there's a lot of grammar and sentence structure mistakes. |
Amy Cullen 5/22/12 . chapter 1OMGGGGGGGGGGG this is really good Write more and Bastian sounds really hot |