|Reviews for My Magical Ceiling|
| FreakShow97 10/7/12 . chapter 1
:) cool poem
| MoonstoneRoses 5/27/12 . chapter 1
very nice :) i've spent many nights staring up at my popcorn ceiling seeing shapes haha
| kkbadoo 5/27/12 . chapter 1
This is simply awesome!
| Honunjama 5/23/12 . chapter 1
The first four lines are really lovely Good job.
'ridden' though stopped the flow for me for a moment (it made me think of to be 'rode' where you mean to be 'rid of') so my only suggestion is to maybe think a way round that one...?