| Reviews for My Magical Ceiling |
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FreakShow97 10/7/12 . chapter 1:) cool poem |
MoonstoneRoses 5/27/12 . chapter 1very nice :) i've spent many nights staring up at my popcorn ceiling seeing shapes haha |
kkbadoo 5/27/12 . chapter 1This is simply awesome! |
Honunjama 5/23/12 . chapter 1The first four lines are really lovely Good job. 'ridden' though stopped the flow for me for a moment (it made me think of to be 'rode' where you mean to be 'rid of') so my only suggestion is to maybe think a way round that one...? Keep writing Suki |