I loved this poem. It's always so hard to find something that you can connect with on an emotional and personal level. But just how you made it sound so loving and sensitive adds to you're personal touch. Besides, any girl loves a great sensitive poem once in a while. :) Good job.

A nice free verse. Its very honorable to care about the bad things that happen in the world and want to make a change.

-William

Really nice poem, I liked the repetition. Bravo :)

I can relate to this poem 100%. It's done extreamly well, with emotion, passion, and truth. Outstanding job, keep it up .