I felt really, really sorry for Patchafire throughout most of the story. And then, just when you thought he'd found a new home and some loving... he kills a little girl! How on earth?! Haha. Death by bunny! Hilarious. I hope that was the intent, because I laughed pretty hard.
I can just imagine Patchafire now, vengefully seeking out Cleovim, killing people in his path until he eventually finds and kills her too. Out of love of course.
Great story! You should continue it!

Wow... at first I didn't undertand the horror part of the story... was totally NOT expecting the rabbit to go insane like that. It would be a major plot twist if Patchafire found out after they were all dead that it was actually the right family... All in all, good story!

Wow, I wasn't expecting the murder of the little girl but I guess if she called me Princess Cuddle Boo I would do the same thing :) This story was pretty good - I liked it! :D

Very odd story, I got to admit, I don't think I ever read anything that involved a killer bunny.