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| LittleLights 5/23/12 . chapter 1
Very, very good. I like how Kiss is slipping constantly into her daydreams, and how she imagines things to make life more bearable. I feel her heartache for Mizuki and the details you used are useful to developing the picture in my mind. I think it's a very beautiful piece. If anything, there were one or two grammar mistakes, but that happens in all writing.