Poor Pill- Julie does need to lighten up and you know, I might actually be changing my mind about Kyle! But yes, I like Pill, I wonder if there's a reason he's being nice to her? (Other than him being a rather good person- which I got from his patience, how else would he never give up on Julie? She is a tough nut to crack...) It was a lovely second chapter :D you might want to just have another quick read through, there's only a few really tiny, almost insignificant, mistakes- but they didn't distract me from seeing that it was a good chapter!

I really like it (:

I'm curious as to what's going to happen. So, with that being said, please update soon. :)

Aspired Writer.

Hiya! This story is lovely and I just wanted to drop you a line so you'd continue it. I was very very impressed to see that already your characters each have a very definite personality and they're all quite realistic too- especially Julie. Her disgust with Kyle is also understandable :D although, you don't portray him as a bad person- in fact, he sounds OK (apart from the whole ugly fiasco with Julie I mean) which makes me love this piece of writing more. It gives kyle a personality too, I think.

The bottom line is- keep going :D!