The line "I've seen the future..." is really personalizing this poem beautifully. Great work !

Painfully true. There are things in this world far worse than death. And all the people who try to cheat time are deluded. No one can do that. Time conquers all.

Nice work.

Hmm, a very interesting and understandable poem.

Really enjoyed this poem. Sometimes people do seem to go for quantity over quality when considering how good someone's life has been, but there are worse things than dying. I really liked the phrase 'shrinking one's life' for some reason. Anyhoo, nice job :)

-JB

Very well written and definitely something we should all think about. Good work. X

This is raw and deep. I've often thought the same when it comes to death and growing old but I couldn't have written it as poetically as you. I keep saying it, but I just can't get over how clever you are at writing! Your style and everything is just inspiring. Needless to say, you have a fan. I'll be checking for more things from you!

Dark themed but actually quite good.

Kitty