I liked the character interaction: Natalie meeting Prudence's family. I wonder if they will become acquaintances. Awesome job! I can't wait for them to hit the sea. I love your characters!

Another great chapter. I wonder if the rude seaman comes back into the picture!

I love all of your descriptions and historical facts. You write so eloquently. Love it!

Cannot wait for the next chapter!

I really like your character Prudence. Her relationship with her mother is so believable! I really loved this addition. You described the ship beautifully and accurately. All of your scenes are full of imagery. I feel as if I am watching a movie!

I just love your story so much, and I hope you update real soon!

MW

I love this story! The characters are so in depth and you've obviously done your research, which as a reader I really appreciate. You're doing a wonderful job of showing the variety of passengers, and yet making them all seem connected. There are a few places where the paragraphing is a little awkward, but all that needs is a few extra hits on the return button. No big deal, especially when compared with all the goodness in this story. Keep writing!

I loved this addition! Brian and Natalie seem so sweet! I have a bad feeling about their survival though, especially Brian's...you leave me in such suspense! Please write more as soon as you can!

MW

James and Katie are such a likable couple I hope that after the hard times they had that their story continues on once the tragedy of the Titanic occurs.

I am eager to see how all this goes :)

I love both characters: Katie and James! Maybe James can use that sweet talking ability to land himself a life boat! I keep wondering who of your characters will live and die. It's so eerie, knowing with what is going to happen! I cannot wait for your next installment! This story is fabulous, historical, and lovely. I love how romantic these characters are, and how diverse each chapter is. You have a real gift for story telling and I am sure that one day this could be published! Keep it up and PLEASE don't stop!

MW

I'm so excited for your characters to board the Titanic! You do a great job portraying scenes and characters, however I wish the story would move along a bit faster. Maybe combine some of your characters into one chapter, and divide it? It's your story of course, and it's only a suggestion. I'm just excited to read your descriptions of the ship, and most of all how your characters deal with the sinking. So so excited! Please update soon!

MW

Love this story so far; it is my favorite of your English Roses stories

I really like this! The characters you have established are really interesting, and your setting is a really good idea because it's so well-known and we as readers know what will happen before it actually happens. Update soon! xx

Not bad. I think you have some interesting characters set up and it is nice to see a diverse bunch so far. Can't wait to see what else you come up with!

This is a really exciting opening chapter! I, too, love the history of the Titanic, and you tell it beautifully. I can tell you did some research. Can't wait to keep reading!

I am huge fan of the Titanic as well. There is just something intriguing about the sinking of an unsinkable ships. I liked your story as well. It is an intriguing idea, having a story about five different women of different stations in life. I look forward to see where you go with this story. My one critism is that some of the sentences are a bit rambling and many of your sentences are in need of commas. I liked your characters, even if I was a little confused because you introduced so many characters at one time.

I can tell you've done your history research; the details are truly exquisite. So few historical novals I read on fiction press are very historically acurate, but yours is. I look forwad to reading more soon.

This is well written as your stories normally are and I have been looking for a good piece of writting about the Titanic so I am glad you are writting this.

Stunning beginning to what no doubt will be one of my favorite stories on here :)