Very nice and lovely. It is written extreamly well. Great job, keep it up .

Amazing poem, brilliantly written.

Kitty

I liked the emotions and the thought that in this. One thing though, that did confuse me was the switching between 'I' and 'You' I'm not sure if the 'you' is the audience, or the person referring to themselves.

Apart from that, it was still a nice poem. It had a great meaning that came across in the last line.