Very beautiful! Fantastic! This poem is very alluring, and I inhaled every word and every line, bit to bit. A poem that truly leaves me speechless, and done wonderfully. So much passion and emotions expressed, it captured my heart! Outstanding job, keep it up :D

Ohmygosh... This is... wow. Amazing. I can relate to it so well. I love the line "Dreams set afloat in the oceans' deep wake", I've never heard it before. I also love "Heartache and pain and pleasure combine/ As dreams and reality slowly intertwine." It's hauntingly beautiful. I've got a question, though, at the end - did she cut herself or is she committing suicide?