I am lovin' this lots! The chars. are great! I wonder if maybe Saul had always had a crush and stuff on Aitan! Aitan's a cool name btw, neva heard of Aitan before. Saul def seems to like Aitan already. I wonder what will happen next so update soonn! Most important,I hope u update VAI... thats my fave from you atm!

What's going on? It's all terribly exciting. *w*

plz update soon. i like the start of the story.

Am I first? Am I first?

I love that so much inexplicable happened in the first chapter and I wish that I had not discovered this before you had put up several of them.

Soo many questions.

Saul's going to be as weird as any of your characters, isn't he?

"How does one become an executioner, apply? Did you need previous experience?"

"Looking over at the executioner, he knew … it hadn't worked. "This isn't fair," Aitan said, without thinking."

I especially liked these parts. Er, lines, I guess.

I particularly adore Aitan. He has varying emotions. The sadness, the anger, the calmness, the stubbornness. He's like this giant ball of different feelings and it's quite refreshing. As for Saul, I keep thinking that maybe he saw Aitan on television or something, so he decided he'd play up the part of the hero. He does seem to have quite the affection for Aitan.

"Saul seemed to be lost for a moment, staring at Aitan slack-jawed."

...Er, maybe even infatuated.

I'm loving how this story's started!

Oh myyyyyy why did Saul save Aitan? So many questions...and how does he know anything about him anyway? And the cuffs come out already! Looking forward to the next update :)

Why did Saul save him? So many questions!

What's the connection!

I love your works!

This is either about to get very violent, or very raunchy. Hurry up and write the next chapter! This is fabulous!