i liked this, aside from some punctuation, and the your/you're mess up, i found this to almost exactly what i think. so good job. i absolutely ADORED the 'stop staring at me like i'm just

some piece of...

grass you can walk on'

totally cracked me up/ again, thanks for sharing!

Aw this was really good. Reminds me of a lot of guys out there who like you because of what they see and not because of your mind or personality. Great poem!

This one gets right to the point.