|Reviews for The Jetty|
| i l n o k 6/23/12 . chapter 1
aw, that was so sad. . . :( It was good,poignant. I quite liked it. :3
| Shauni Cooper 6/11/12 . chapter 1
Aw! Romantic and sad! Again I am reduced to wondering how you come up with such marvelous poems! Speechless once more!
An exquisite piece! Keep it up! :)
As always, keep writing!
| IF3R 6/9/12 . chapter 1
This is so sweet and sad at the same time, I wish I could write as good as this (:
| Jenny Sue 6/3/12 . chapter 1
Really beautiful poem. I loved the line 'Enveloped by the sea like a long lost friend' :)
| Craig Thorpe 6/3/12 . chapter 1
Good job, I could feel the emotion in this piece
| Damian B 5/30/12 . chapter 1
This is a brilliant piece of writing, I have to say this touched my heart, with the level of emotion I felt radiating from this. Please continue writing to your fullest and never give up)
| Valenteen 5/29/12 . chapter 1
That is such a lovely sad story. The imagery is great- particularly about the storm- as well as it being actually happening, it is saying what's going on inside her (a battle to get the courage enough to jump in).
| Mylilblackpen 5/27/12 . chapter 1
Like with everything you write, it is filled with beautiful imagery that captures the purpose/story you're writing. I love your style of writing and also this piece.
| TheGlycoprotein 5/26/12 . chapter 1
Beautiful imagery as always :)
| Meadow Frost 5/26/12 . chapter 1
Aww that was romantic and sad. You always paint a magical picture in my head. Wonderful job. :-)
| kaykay-writes 5/26/12 . chapter 1
A unique and beautifully written piece, I say! I loved the pictures that you tried to transport and the perspective. Keep writing! :)
| BFF2FP 5/26/12 . chapter 1
Wow... that was deep. I really enjoyed it. You know what? I'm gonna favorite this! I'm a hopeless romantic, so... Um, yeah. Thanks for such an awesome story!