I love the repetition in this piece! It was so haunting and the ending how you gave a glimmer of hope then smashed it away... it was deathly but the venom in this is addicting and so, so, wrong... I can't help but want more. By far my favoritest piece from you. (That's right... I just said favoritest)

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Reading this makes me feel EXTREMELY SAD for the one who wrote it. NOT out of pity out of concern.

This is some good work. I wish I could write poems this long.

I know it's awful... You could have done so many things. TT_TT I'm sorry...