Wonderful. If I haven't said it already in one of my other reviews, you've really got a way with words. I know it may sound like I'm just saying that, but it's true. That's why I'm always so excited to read this story whenever you update it. I feel like I should give a witty comment about how maybe should always try to do things God's way, but witty comments never seem to come when I really want them to lol. Anyways, please update whenever you have the chance :)

This is my favorite chapter, and this overall was amazing. But can you write more short stories here?

Once again your poem amazes me. You have a way of explaining things better than I know how to put in words, so thank you. :)
I absolutely love this, especially the last part about if life would still be as meaningful if everything were easy. It really gives you something to think about. :)

This is so true. God is always there watching over you. Sometimes you can't hear him, but he's there. Sometimes he's just hard to hear.

We're so lucky to have been saved. I will help stand up for God. :)

Great poem. I hope anyone that feels like this in real life finds God.

Such a beautiful poem. Once again I wonder if someone could make it into a song. Let's both of us try to help people find God's love. :)

Yes we need to live a life with Jesus.

True poem. You're a really talented writer.

Wow that's an amazing dream.

I wonder if this would make a good song

This is so true. I agree with you completely.

Wonderful! We need to show the world God's love.

This is true. God is amazing! :)

Beautiful poem :)