Okay so at the ending is it bad i thought of drugs and drug dealers, or is that what the ending is supposed to be?
Anyways this is really good, i like it. you should add more.
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Thank-you for reviewing my story! This is so cool! Didn't expect that, and I'm not too sure what happened at the end bit with the people that might kill them, and the missions, but it was very well written and I think this would be good if you carried on and turned it into it's own story. Unless of course you feel it might ruin the story as it does work very well on it's own. Anyway, really liked this, and I'm excited to read your other stories!

Whoa! What's going on in the end there? Very well written; no wasted words. Very descriptive. Keep it up!