I love you! :3

This chapter is so sad. What's don't get is why they won't let Jay go I thought they only took her because they thought that she was being abused by Avery's pack? Even though what happened in the chapter upset me a little because Jay is being held captive for 6 months. Still so happy you updated. Seriously I don't know how many times I've said this but I love your story.

ChameleonRose

I'm sorry Jay, Kenley's right. :P That was probably one of the most least thought out escape attempts I have ever read. Xp

She was very sick with no direction in snowy winter.(dont escape if you need pain killers!)

A dude huh? This is one of those unreliable protagonist things?

I occasionally wonder how the story would have been turning out if his sister wasnt there when her recently discovered mate assulted her. o.o That would be a significant plot change for all of it. A whole 'nother story.

Calm down, I didn't review this time because I was satisfied... You aren't the only one with a butt load of homework you know! Keep up the good work and I suppose I shall have to keep reading... Who am I kidding, I love this dont let it end!

That's right suckaz. Goin' for the gold! And I have no idea what I am saying. And I still feel the need to punch Kenley. Repeatedly. With steel. And then be mauled by tiger. Repeatedly.

Omg,! I'm so glad you updated, I missed this story a lot! Gosh jayda was so close! I feel so bad for her dad though. :( I hope Avery finds her soon.

Omg! Six months! I hope Avery's lead is solid, the poor boy! Poor Jeda, can't seem to catch a break. Great story and I hope this ends with a bang! Happy writing!

For chapter 16- I noticed you didn't mention jays mom surely she is worried and was maybe about too?

So so happy happy happy that you posted a chapter! Loved it! Loved how Darcy was thought to be a girl! Just so excited to read more! I was wondering if you were going to drag out her kiddnapping. I like how your doing it so far and am just as excited to read more so keep up the good work!

I sat staring at the screen refusing to believe this chapter was over till reality hit :(

hey!
OMG I actual love your story so much once I started I could not stop reading! Best Story I have read on Fiction Press so far! hahaah
The characters a great! love the relationship between Avery and Jay. I really want her to tell him about all her family issues. will be a good chapter! Anyways I know your must be sure busy but please update this as soon as possible because I want to keep reading! :)

I suppose this is a sufficient installment... just keep them coming and no one gets hurt :)

I completely love this story! I really hope you get around to updating soon!

Woah.

please update, i've only just got back onto this site and ur story is the first i have truly began to enjoy again, so ur updating would be much appreciated
:)