Loved it but a bit predictable.

After reviewing all the submissions, your entry was not selected as the winner. However, you stil get a review!

I absolutely love the VOICE of the narrator- very lively. It's the entertaining kind of voice that let's you know that what you're reading is going to be really good. It was a very lovely approach to a love confession- the ending was very swoon-worthy. I absolutely adored this one-shot.

Hey! You left a beautiful review on my story (thank you!) and I since you said you were from Australia, I just HAD to check out your entry! Australian buddies for life!

I found this story so beautiful. And I loved all the Australian things you put in it, like ranga (LOVE IT SO MUCH) and p-plates (when I put that in one of my stories, everyone was a bit like wtf?) and Maccas! I don't know if other countries shorten it that way, but I totally understood.

Anyway, I completely adored you entry and fell in love with this line especially: "There's no point in an intense sexually-charged chemistry if you can't stand to be around each other during the day. You need to be friends first, lovers second." It's so true. There are so many stories with that kind of chemistry so I love seeing a good old best friends to lovers type one.

Good work!

A very enjoyable read. I loved the way the characters interacted, and how the entire thing flows so smoothly.