| Reviews for Sh'yan of Silk |
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Fryvi 4/17/13 . chapter 30Haha, ok, I thought it was nice though:) Is Say'amai the first Mistress? |
Fryvi 3/3/13 . chapter 29Nice chapter:) it really gave a good impression of the roles of the genders, and of how silk is made. Looking forward to the next one:D |
Fryvi 2/15/13 . chapter 28New chapter, yeey! Kyave and Sh'yan seem a bit closer:D Looking forward to see how the silk-weaving goes |
Fryvi 1/4/13 . chapter 27Hihi, I liked this chapter, even though I partly wish some more romance happened. Seems like the queen is trying to get them together:D |
Fryvi 11/23/12 . chapter 26Review! yeey! As always, I like seeing Kyave and Sh'yan getting along so well:D I'm still having a bit of problems understanding how the... contest? I understand Sh'yan will be locked up in a room making silk, but what will be the goal? Is it to make a certain amount, just to show he can do it, or will there be some challenge he has to beat in order to prove the point? |
cattenlent 11/23/12 . chapter 26this chapter did not really clarified anything. While i understand the slow progression of relationships, the incredibly slow progression of the whole story makes me tad impatient. It feels like nothing of importance has happened during the past 25 chapters. |
Fryvi 11/10/12 . chapter 25Of course you deserve reviews! :D I love getting more information about Sh'yan, and I love the information we got. It's like it makes sense in a way, that that's why he's so "special" to the other people in the palace. The fact that Kyave admitted he was cute wasn't so bad either(hihi). |
Rogue Energizer Bunny 11/9/12 . chapter 25AND THE TWO SEPARATE PLOTS BE MATED AT LAST. I'm still not a fan of how long it took, but whatever. (You're doing NaNo too? Is the real reason I popped up here, along with it being such a significant plot point...) |
tangledoctopus 11/9/12 . chapter 25I so knew Shyan came from a wealthy family. He said he didn't wear silk since his childhood somewhere in there xD But I don't think I get the whole picture concerning the queen's plan |
MeanderRose 10/19/12 . chapter 24Makes me wonder...how /do/ you pronounce "Sh'yan?" I always like reading Kyave's letters. It's a nice way to showcase his connections to Sheva without actually including scenes in Sheva, if that makes sense. He's so cute with his family. |
Fryvi 10/19/12 . chapter 24*applause* ;) I like the letter, and the chapter:D |
MeanderRose 10/15/12 . chapter 23Aww, another Sh'yan chapter! Although I was a bit disappointed that Kyave/Sh'yan still hasn't moved. Boo. But that's my shipper's heart talking. Malwe...just what the hell is she planning? I can't read her at all. And I am very, very curious as to her and Sh'yan's relationship. Right now my pet theory is that she's related to him in some way. But I suppose we shall see. In due time. |
MeanderRose 10/15/12 . chapter 22It took him a moment to remember what Sheva was and why the queen would want to hear about it. He'd gotten too engrossed in problem solving, and it came as a shock to have the conversation ended. - I really like this line. It's a nice, subtle look at the way Kyave's mind functions. I keep forgetting that he's basically a nerd, so it's nice to have reminders like this. The queen is...eh, what is she playing at? I still haven't got much a grasp of her character. For some reason, the earlier chapters gave me the impression that she was more serious than this. We've been getting a lot of worldbuilding lately. Not a bad thing, and it is fascinating, but I am eager for the plot to start moving in a big way again. |
Fryvi 10/14/12 . chapter 23Yey for queen Malwe! Too bad Kyave was busy:/ Nice chapter though:D |
Fryvi 10/7/12 . chapter 22At least they realize they have a problemxD I'm looking forward to seeing how they'll solve it The sentence "Guys can do lots of things." made me a bit confused though... was it supposed to be gays or something? |