I like the Queen! I sure hope she doesn't turn out to be evil...XD

But don't remove the Sh'yan chapters! I like getting to read things from his perspective. He's a bit of a cipher in the Kyave chapters tbh, so his own chapters help humanize him a lot.

Ahh, that's what I expected!

The worldbuilding is great. It really feels like a real place, with all its subtle little customs and contradictions.

I'm getting a bad feeling from Zokol, though...aww, but I like him.

I liked this chapter. The only thing might be that Kyave should have pushed Sh'yan a bit more for the reason:P

I liked the chapter :] but more sh'yan and kyave interaction wouldn't hurt xD
and you know a skinny dipping kyave would be good too _ it's a shame he's not comfortable :]

IT'S WAY PAST LIV'S BIRTHDAY. BWAH.

*facecomputer*

Oh, shit, I wrote birthday instead of bedtime. Ooops. That doesn't make sense. Ho well.

They don't wear clothes to the beach? Heh heh heh. That's awky. And then, is Sh'yan not allowed to go since he's gay? Poor guy can't catch a break.

I feel like there shoulda been more to this chapter. Almost like it was missing a scene near the end? Not a lot happened, so.

But don't mind me, coz I'm clearly not sane right now. WEEEh. Goodnight!
-Liv

Zokol is an ass!
But I really like the chapter

finally... I've been waiting for this like a fangirl suffering withdrawal :] _ I just looove Sh'yan , he's adorable

Zokol...

Y U NO GET REVIEWS?

That's odd. You should spam it in the RG threads.

I lurve this chapter. I lurve Sh'yann. I think we've gone over this.

K BAI NOW
-Liv

Nice idea with some change of scenery. Haha, Lenzes reaction to the "you" was funnyXD

"Being the new ambassador of a far away country proves a difficult job. How do you strenghten ties with a country when you can't even get a grasp on the strings? And then there is that interesting stable boy..."
..Maybe not much better, but at least I triedXD
I really like the Sh'yan chapters! They tell us so much more of his character

Love this chapter. Keeps getting better. Keep going!

I think the Sh'yan chapters are important to keep the romance believable, and I actually think there should be more of them. But we've already discussed my point of view on this XD, so ignore me.

The summary's fine the way it is. I think.

I was going to save this for the review marathon, which start in FOUR HOUR NO SLEEP, but... it was staring at me. So I read it. D:

Oh, but I like this one. It's much more straightforward.

Personal difficulties? Something up?

Blech. I've been crazy busy beta-ing and shit lately, sorry. Nice chapter! This one's my favorite so far. Update soon!

they are so cute _