| Reviews for Sh'yan of Silk |
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JaseCD 7/3/12 . chapter 11Hmm, I could be completely off in this inference but maybe the women in the country hold more power over men? Interesting, but good chapter! Update soon please!:) |
Rogue Energizer Bunny 6/29/12 . chapter 9Hm. See, the issue I have with this is I don't see how the romance connects with this part of the conflict. I mean, it seems like there are two different conflicts: how Kyave and Sh'yann kinda-sorta have a thing, and then this diplomat stuff. They don't seem cohesive-it's like part of this is slash, and part of it's some political fantasy. I love the romance, but parts like this get a bit tiresome since it's just Kyave musing about the country. Maybe they'll intersect faster, but I feel like they should've by now. That's just my take on it so far. -REB |
Rogue Energizer Bunny 6/20/12 . chapter 8Woah. Something's up with this review box. Trippy... Anyway, I thought this chapter was good. You displayed Sh'yan's shyness well, I think; shy people often come across ass disinterested or annoyed when they're nervous. Heh. Update soon! -REB |
Fryvi 6/20/12 . chapter 8Poor Sh'yan again:/ I'm starting to wonder, is he a slave?:O |
CalliScribbles 6/16/12 . chapter 7Oh, Kyave. You're adorable, but you still have no idea what's going on around you in this country, do you? I'll draw you a horse (in Color!) soon. |
Rogue Energizer Bunny 6/14/12 . chapter 7Sh'yan is so sweet. AND DRAWING! I should be drawing. -REB |
CalliScribbles 6/12/12 . chapter 6Hmmmm... Honestly, I'm almost as intrigued by this place as Kyave. |
Rogue Energizer Bunny 6/10/12 . chapter 6WHERE'S ME SEXY ROMANCE? BLEH. |
JaseCD 6/10/12 . chapter 6Hmmm, interesting cultural differences:) anyways, good story! Keep it up! |
Fryvi 6/10/12 . chapter 6Interesting customs! I'm looking forward to how this affects the story as it develops:D |
CalliScribbles 6/6/12 . chapter 5Ideas on what to draw are percolating. Slowly. Want a horse? I might be still good at drawing them... |
CalliScribbles 6/6/12 . chapter 4:( The other servants don't like Sh'yan because of his background, is that it? (Though we'll probably hear more about that later...) |
CalliScribbles 6/6/12 . chapter 3Don't get heatstroke, Kyave. You're entertaining and you've been one of the more reasonable people around here so far. You're going to have sore everything in the morning after you burn though. Just so you know. Zokol disliked that question a little bit more than he lets on, too... |
CalliScribbles 6/6/12 . chapter 2This one seems quite colorful, compared to the others. But that's probably because Heswa's bright and sunny and stuff. Oh, and the names. You can so tell which ones are Shevan and which ones are Heswa. It's fun. |
Rogue Energizer Bunny 6/5/12 . chapter 5My PMs should be functional again. Heh. IDK what happened, this site hates me. The white thing was interesting. I never thought of white that way. Hm... Aw. Did something happen to Sh'yan, and that's why he's quiet? -REB |