Love this story! Hope that you will update soon!

I know my nickname sucks... But really, this story deserves more reviews than it has now!

The story is very interesting! Keep it up! And plus, i really love romeo now!

Wow, the plot of this story seems really interesting! The summary hooked me in from the start; I mean Romeo and Juliet in modern day is awesome, not to mention a non-cliche.

One thing I would like to point out though is that the writing seems a tad bit too formal, and maybe you would consider proofreading your story. (I'm sorry, I'm sort of a spelling and grammar Nazi except when it's clearly an accident)

Nevertheless, this story has a lot of promise! Good luck, and update soon. :)

This is a great premise and lovely first chapter. I've got to warn you, though: the reason why R&J was a tragedy was because Shakespeare was trying to show how idiotic love at first sight was. I'm not telling you how to write your story, but if it ever gets published (it is that good, really) this will be the first thing critics will mention. That said, once I log in this will go on my favorite stories list! :-)