Reviews for Pain
The Red Eyed Lynx 5/31/12 . chapter 1
your poetry sounds a lot like my sisters. it's really good.
Meadow Frost 5/30/12 . chapter 1
I understand. I wish I didn't, but I do. That's all I will say.

Good poem.
SilenceWhispering24 5/29/12 . chapter 1
You think no one understands...

But you're wrong.

It's funny how we tell ourselves

That no one cares

While in all honesty

Many around us

Are suffering the same thing.

I understand. This is my real account; PM me if you need someone to talk to.
WritersBlue0 5/29/12 . chapter 1
This poem could be just a few more lines longer. and less violent. But other then that it was a pretty nice poem.
XiaanRei 5/29/12 . chapter 1
You managed to get a powerful statement across in very few words, nicely done.

I also love the last line, there's something slightly sinister about it.

Great job.
thetabbykitteh 5/29/12 . chapter 1
Good poem, but deppressing. Loved the wording in this one.