|Reviews for Pain|
| The Red Eyed Lynx 5/31/12 . chapter 1
your poetry sounds a lot like my sisters. it's really good.
| Meadow Frost 5/30/12 . chapter 1
I understand. I wish I didn't, but I do. That's all I will say.
| SilenceWhispering24 5/29/12 . chapter 1
You think no one understands...
But you're wrong.
It's funny how we tell ourselves
That no one cares
While in all honesty
Many around us
Are suffering the same thing.
I understand. This is my real account; PM me if you need someone to talk to.
| WritersBlue0 5/29/12 . chapter 1
This poem could be just a few more lines longer. and less violent. But other then that it was a pretty nice poem.
| XiaanRei 5/29/12 . chapter 1
You managed to get a powerful statement across in very few words, nicely done.
I also love the last line, there's something slightly sinister about it.
| thetabbykitteh 5/29/12 . chapter 1
Good poem, but deppressing. Loved the wording in this one.