|Reviews for Make It Nasty|
| liks 12/6/12 . chapter 13
Hi I think u shld go with plan A cause uve invariably already dragged the romance in the story for far too long I think u shld get on with it
And hey pls dnt het me wrong I mean well and I really like the theme of,ur story but I'm just being straight forward
| shehasnoname 12/6/12 . chapter 13
A for sure :)
I think if you go with option B, there'd be many irrelevant chapters to the overall plot line of the story.
And I'm still not so sure I like Logan's character and why Emery likes him the way she does...lol though it may have something to do with my bias for Jimmy... c: I think he and Emery would work out better as a couple.
| stephyxo 12/6/12 . chapter 13
A! I can't wait for her to come back ahh
| Dancing in Crimson 12/6/12 . chapter 13
Do (A) I'm obsessed with story and how amazing it is! I miss Emery and I need to see her and Logan together! Ugh I think loving a story this much is unhealthy...oh well absolutely amazing! Update soon! :)
| Guest 12/6/12 . chapter 11
Awesome. Basic teenage dream...beautiful
| Nita The Scene 12/5/12 . chapter 13
Thanks for posting another chapter I thought it was a good idea for you to show Logan's POV for a change. I think you should do maybe a mixture of both A and B. I would like to know a little bit more about Logan but the story is going to get a little dull without it's main character( Emery) missing in action. Or maybe Emery should get a bf too that would be extremely interesting...
Please Update soon and keep up the excellent work. :)
| Guest 12/5/12 . chapter 13
A! We need more Emery and Logan 3
| Samantha 12/5/12 . chapter 4
Me and my roommate love your story! It is truly amazing; you're very articulate and descriptive. The way you weave the tale is great. We love the progression of Emery and Logan's relationship thus far; every time they interact we can't help but grin mad hard. We think you have amazing talent, and should look to get the story published when you're finished. Update soon! :) We also love the humor in the story, as well as the title because we definitely dance to that song on the regular. Maybe next story you write could be called F**king Problem, lol ;D
| Just a Little Miss 12/5/12 . chapter 13
B, I think. I want to hate Logan for a little while. He definetly deserves it. So yeah.
I'd also like to see a bit of her as well as Darrel's life since she left. But I suppose that's up to you :)
good writing, little miss anxious
| Demon Chic 101 12/5/12 . chapter 13
Can't you do a and b? Bring emery back but still continue with logan pov. Oh and jimmy's logan right? Cool I like it and keep us posted here.
| unthinkable123 12/5/12 . chapter 13
Definitely option 'A'
| Karma1220 12/5/12 . chapter 13
| gunner-girl 12/5/12 . chapter 13
I think you should explain more about Logan. But shorten it a little-passing time a little quicker maybe? When Emery comes, I think he should realize how much he likes her and figure his shit out. And Darrel? He needs to lighten up. Maybe Logan and Darrel should have a conversation and maybe let them be together OUTSIDE of the house. I don't want to make it sound like I want this to be a fairy tail or something, so I think there should be pushing and tugging between Darrel and him-what about Jimmy? Has she ever gotten her phone back? Maybe she should catch up on that when she gets back also. PLEASE don't let me wait THREE months for the next update-but I loved you when I saw chapter '13'. Punctuation is good, didn't see many typos at ALL. Peace, review, and fav my stories ya'll
| Livie 12/5/12 . chapter 13
| foxyricanlady 12/5/12 . chapter 13
Hey welcome back. i think you should do a little of both a & b like what its been like for emery this last five months like as well as logans too. does she still have feeling for him or still hurt for the way things when down. i think you should make her a like distance when she comes back a little cold if you will.