I really like this. Good job.

Nicely written! I truly understand this.

Wow. I loved this. It's simple but something complex at the same time in the way you write it. It's very well written and it really pulled at me. Good work. X

I admire how easily and smoothly this poem flows, it even tells the reader a small story- the simplicity and sort-of disappointed feel it has is lovely _. "Smart boy. Blind boy." I love those two lines overall I really just love this poem!

This is cute in a bittersweet way. Like, at first, it seems like a boy you'd crush on, then you find out he's blind. Way to go with the tragic ending kind of thing.

keep writing, anyways! :)