i love how your poetry always tells a great, seemingly long story in just a few words. makes you think. i like the title.

wow this is really great i can't

words dont't - can't -

express

this is really fabulous okay

and this review sucks, sorry

everything you wrote seemed to be offhandedly written, and that added more thickness to the emotion. this was really good :) keep writing!

does the ending mean she committed suicide?

I love the title you chose. It's so perfect :D

Awesome.