|Reviews for Finding Paradise|
| Redcatie7 9/10/12 . chapter 12
And the flame climbs higher...
| smell my fart 9/9/12 . chapter 12
dude, this story is sick...and by sick, i mean AWESOME! I like your idea of ruining one's reputation at cost of betrayal. Noah is kind of creepy in a borderline sociopath way, but I like how you portray his character. You make me want to kill that motherfucker right at the instant. I like bobby more.
| korraandmako4ever 9/9/12 . chapter 12
Dang nabbit what the heck was Bobby thinking? And Noah, too. Poor Tiara, she's drunk and way too much. (TTTT! BAD TIARA!) Hopefully she doesn't do anything dumber. I'm sorry I haven't read I need to get a better phone. :( Anyways, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :)
| The Phoenix Girl 9/9/12 . chapter 12
I didn't want this chapter to end... I'm very fond of this story and the characters... I love how everyone one of them has her/his own baggage... truly an amazing story!
Stupid Camille! why did she have to show up again! and I thought Bobby likes Tiara now :'( that poor kid is a mess!
I can't wait to see what will happen with Tiara next! and Noah!
Keep up your great work :)
| isfuathliomgaeilge 9/9/12 . chapter 12
I love this story! Its awseome! :P update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next! :P
| Kaal 9/9/12 . chapter 12
No! I can't believe that Noah is actually getting into Tiara's head. I hope he doesn't corrupt her any further.
| julianmarq 9/8/12 . chapter 12
Human nature is not about destroying oneself, human nature is about destroying others. I've concluded that (along with Noah being mildly retarded and Jenna being just plain pathetic) Tiara is just stupid (she isn't a brain, real brains don't thrive in pathetic stuff such as alcohol or parties and are not enticed by them, the real fun for them is enriching themselves and controlling other people, real brains are the real manipulators, all skills needed to succeed, not mindless scum like Noah or Jenna, if Tiara was really a brain she could see easily through Noah, brains have it easy figuring out other people, have it easy to lie and almost impossible to be lied to) and Bobby is just sad, I see what is the intend of the character and so I'm giving up on this story, such wasted potential.
| absolut random 9/7/12 . chapter 11
omg omg omg omg OMG!
| julianmarq 9/8/12 . chapter 11
"He always throws sick, raging, off-the-hook parties but that's what teenage life is, Tiara. If you're not willing to experience everything, you'd be naïve forever,"
At this line I can only say: lol wtf? *Facepalm*
Anyways, I hope whatever petty game Noah's almost non existent brains are to come up with helps Bobby in the end, it'd certainly be good for him if people are aware of his problem so he can get help, hopefully from Tiara.
| julianmarq 9/8/12 . chapter 10
In the first chapter Noah was mentally bullying Tiara since elementary school and in this one he was a gentleman with her... yeah right.
And even though now I know it is going to finish with a predictable end I still find myself rooting more and more for Bobby, he also has a despicable second life, but at least he knows it is despicable and, with Tiara, is starting to thrive to fix it, while the as*hole retard just thrives to delve more in that life. *Eyeroll*
I still have a tiny hope I'm wrong about my assumption of how it is going to end tho.
| julianmarq 9/8/12 . chapter 9
I liked the ending of this chapter. I find Bobby's story and his relationship with Tiara much more enticing and fulfilling than Noah and Jenna's petty games and they thinking all the time that they own the world and are master manipulators when neither of them have enough brains to do either.
| crush311 9/8/12 . chapter 12
So I'm a little confused does Noah still love tiara?
| sunkissed-skin 9/7/12 . chapter 12
Busted. Looks like someone is a real party girl here (are you?) lol.
Damn people on acid. I really enjoyed reading this chapter! What I like about this story is that it's kind of unpredictable. As typical as the good-girl-meets-bad-boy cliche, I'm glad you choose to stray a little from the traditional everybody-is-happy plotline- because in this story: Nobody is happy for who they are, and that's what makes this fic interesting. I can totally relate with some of your characters because I've been through the same phase where I want to escape from reality just because I want to fit in. I really like the twist you put in your characters. Noah came from an upstanding family with still-married parents, but he choose to ruin other people's lives (what a sociopath!). I think you portray Bobby's characters quite well, especially the way he struggle with temptation and desires, and how he lost it. Tiara's curiosity is normal, but I really don't want you to turn her to a bad girl. We still need a good girl to balance the bitchiness of others.
I really like this quote from Noah:
["Fun to me isn't something solid," he leaned his head against the headrest and stared up at the ceiling. "It's intangible. It's about pushing your boundary- beyond anything you've ever experienced. Your mind rebelling everything you once stand for. It's a pent-up insanity," he laughed and put a hand over his eyes. "Just some crazy damn shit you do that makes you feel like flying."]
I'm looking forward for more :D
| julianmarq 9/7/12 . chapter 8
"He was always trying to be good in front of his parents, his teachers and the society- and where has it gotten him? Nowhere. For once in his life, he just wanted to get out of that life and be himself."
Well, from that line I assume Noah has the mindset of a total fail at life and Bobby is in desperate need of someone to help him.
| Fallcolours 9/7/12 . chapter 12
Whoa this Camille girl came and destroyed Jenna Bobby and Noah at the same time / I feel so sorry for Tiara and both of the guys. I dont even know why but this chap kind of teared me up with Tiara wasted and boys so high that they cant even help her of something happens to her while shes drunk!