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   Celtic-Memories 9/15/12 . chapter 22WOOT more class skipping! All turned out good in the end. :D |
| whatthegreencarrot 9/11/12 . chapter 2 [Casey I thought to myself, she seemed like a hard-ass chick but it was obvious that she was falling for me, and by obvious I mean very obvious I think she had even salivated while staring at me, but hey who can blame her?] That is a run-on sentence, I think. There should be a comma after "Casey" and a semicolon after "myself," not a comma. Comma after "chick." Period after "obvious," and the "I think she even salivated" part should be a different sentence. "But hey who can blame her?" should've been "But hey, who could blame her?" instead. Toodles— -whatthegreencarrot |
| E.Gaze 9/3/12 . chapter 1 Hey! You wanted me to read this and I have to say I'm impressed! I really like the narration. Casey is very charismatic and it makes the story very original and interesting, it intrigues you from the start. The dialogue reminds me of something out of a movie, well done! And congrats on finishing this book too! :) , |
| beverlyamethyst16 9/1/12 . chapter 22 Haha I stuck through it all ;) And loved it! So sad its over! |
| Michelle Valentine 8/28/12 . chapter 1 This is so darn cute! The dialog is GREAT! I love the banter between your main character and Conner. I can definitely see myself digging Conner as a love interest! KEEP WRITING! :D |
| Guest 8/26/12 . chapter 22 Hello! |
| GNTGenius 8/24/12 . chapter 22 Great Story... made me laugh loads! |
| skye real 8/24/12 . chapter 22 Aawww finished already? I really enjoyed that. Please keep me posted on your new stories :-) |
| Doc Olympia 8/23/12 . chapter 22 I just read this fit, and I loved it. Sure, Mandy, Connor, and Casey had their bitchy/bastardy moments, but other than that, this was great. It kinda reminded me of those weird drama shows on TV all the time. :) |
| SayWeCanFly 8/23/12 . chapter 22 Hai der. (: |
| HopelessRomantic97 8/23/12 . chapter 22 Hi!:P just read the last chapter of The Hot, new Guy. Can't believe its finished! Can't wait for what's coming up next:) |
| JJsMommy29 8/23/12 . chapter 22 loved this story |
| colbyjackchz 8/23/12 . chapter 22 Wonderful job! Loved the ending, the story, the characters, EVERYTHING! Congratulations on finishing it and I look forward to more of your stories :) |
| QueenofLove 8/23/12 . chapter 22 2;pwekbdl sc,. is that good enough? hahah but no, seriously yay! it's a very lovely ending! and of course i'm glad it ended the way it was supposed to! |
| Starsis 8/23/12 . chapter 22 The ending was awesome, but it's sad to think that it ended. Great story! :) |
