Great story. like how you're dragging their relationship. In xome books they would make out on the first chapter, you know? And my favorite character is Carrie. Keep developing her!

awesome chap sad ending tho!

Haha you took my advice! Great chap and not just cas ki suggested it was just a good chapter.

I love this story! 7 sons and then 1 girl who lives there and is not related to them. More chapters please!

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I love the amount of detail and characterization you are able to instill into the story, even though it is only the prologue. I see so many stories on here that have really short and succinct prologues and first chapters, that it's nice to see something that has substance to it in the beginning.

I also like the clicher you were able to end on - it should definitely keep the reader coming back for more. I'm glad you already had the next chapter posted, otherwise I'd be irritated that I had to wait. XD

Good job!

I love love love this haha!

i like all your main characters!

I think it would be cool to see more Mrs. Burke and Elizabeth bonding time!

I love how there isnt any mushy romance, is there gonna be a love triangle at all? (sorry i reeally hope not but i think that would be the only problems id have with your story as i looove it so much so far.

I like how Liz has past issues and i cant wait to read more about them!

Please update soon!

- Shay

Yay an update! Thank you for adding the ages of the boys. It definitely helped me figure out who everyone is :)

this is something new you have started and it is interesting. i really enjoyed reading this and can't wait to read the next chapter.

So far this is a really interesting story. Do you have the ages of all the boys laid out? I seem to have trouble picturing them and I think knowing how old they are will help. I believe you mentioned the youngest was 5, but that is the only age I remember seeing.

I look forward to reading more about Elizabeth and Sam. :)

Why hasn't this got more reviews I love it! Pleassssse write more! I have an account but it's like impossible to log in on my iPod haha but I go by SwampTreader on here :)

I knew it,I knew it would be Sam not Noel!

I love your story and I was thinking you should add like a Skype call or something between carrie and her in Sam walks in. Or something likenjust for the "I've been approved by your best friend" factor which is incredibly inportant if you ask me.

Love your story update soon preferably to. Chapters today, cas I can't wait to see what your going to do with this story