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UMMLC 7/24/12 . chapter 9 I wish she wasn't dating Xavier I mean your suppose to get to know each other before you date. I feel so sorry for Ben and I hope she realizes that Xavier isn't the right guy for her. Sincerely U MadeMyLifeComplete |
UMMLC 7/23/12 . chapter 8 Great chapter though poor Ben :( Xavier does deserve Hannah at all. I hope she realizes also I dont really have any ideas though I know you'll think of something besides its great so far. So just keep doing what your doing :D Sincerely U MadeMyLifeComplete |
prankster105 7/23/12 . chapter 8i unerstand and thanks for at least posting a chapter! |
prankster105 7/22/12 . chapter 7the mistakes are no problem. i love how hannnah and ben's relationship is evolving and honestly idk what xavier wants to talk to hannah about. and absolutely emma and Lucas should confront each other about their feelings. An sure, sarah could have a love interest. I mean why not? it would add more to the story. |
UMMLC 7/22/12 . chapter 7 I really like it so far and well I kind of don't want her to end up with Xavier though I guess some twist has to happen also for a first story this is really good :) Sincerely U MadeMyLifeComplete |
prankster105 7/21/12 . chapter 6i luv it. please keep updating as quickly as you have! |
UMMLC 7/20/12 . chapter 4 I really love chapter three and four and I like how you swap between characters. I hope Hannah doesn't fall for Xavier though you never know. Can't wait for more chapters to come. Also I know how hard it is to punctuate your story or use the correct grammar though you could always ask for a Beta which is someone who goes over you work before you put it up to make sure you have little to no errors. I would totally do that job for you though I to have trouble with punctuation and grammar. I can't wait for the next few chapters to come! :D Sincerely U MadeMyLifeComplete |
prankster105 7/20/12 . chapter 4hey thanx for adding another chapter. I really like how each chapter you are altering it from one of the two main character's to the other's. It really clever actually. |
Raya47 7/20/12 . chapter 3Nice :) |
Mr.Terry 7/20/12 . chapter 3nice story...really intresting.. |
shehasnoname 7/20/12 . chapter 2 Very interesting! x) Love the characters so far. There's just some punctuation and grammar issues. Great start to a story though! |
UMMLC 7/19/12 . chapter 2 I really like this story so far and I can't wait to see what happens when Ben and Hannah are reunited again :) Please let me know when you've updated Sincerely U MadeMyLifeComplete |