So creepy! It truly brought me in making me want to read more! The imagery is wonderful; I can imagine it all, and it reminds me of the well under my deck as a kid, which was equally creepy.

So chilling, it's pretty cool, written in my favourite tense, and favourite person, though it's almost like you're writing by the book of horror. Even though you've got incredible writng skills (That of which I haven't seen since Dirty-Angel-Toes) it feels like you haven't done anything that someone else has already done.