|Reviews for Thinking of You|
| cowhampgs97 11/12/12 . chapter 11
Pleeeeeaaaasssseeeee write more!
| keke 9/3/12 . chapter 11
| Maddy 8/7/12 . chapter 1
Really good first chapter. I like your introduction of the characters and the plots. Plus I only saw a one minor issus such as not adding s at the end of a few words, but that's about it. Told you I wouldn't be to nit picky. Oh yeah and try using I a little less to let it flow better.
| Guest 7/21/12 . chapter 9
| summerbliss18 6/4/12 . chapter 1
This is good, I like it your characters seem realistic too, which is sometimes hard to find. I do have one suggestion though, don't take it in offense I just like giving helpful reviews. I'd maybe suggest to use less I's, just to make it flow bette. I know writing in first person can be tricky, but it gets easier. Like instead of saying, I saw him and my heart pounded, you could say seeing his brown familiar eyes watching me, sent my heart in a pulsating race inside my chest. Anyway, keep writing this is a good story :)
| Moemoepl 6/1/12 . chapter 1
I like this story. I can't wait to see what happens to James and Paige when James leaves to join the Navy!