Hey! You know me(obviously). The story is quite interesting. It fits the song pretty well, except you did not put enough emotion into the story between the song lyrics. It made it seem like she was going crazy(which, i know, she was supposed to be). Altogether a great story though. And btw mine arent like this one, they are litterally books. But still good job. You do need some more experience with love and pain fanfics though(but you do mystery ones quite well). So yep. Just some advice for you there. :)

Wow, that's pretty creepy. :P The 150 years later part was a little random.