Omigosh. Wow.
Is every female in this story pregnant? Lol
This was really incredible, truly. There was so much in the first chapter. I really like how Lexi loves her husband but also hates him at the same time, the way you did it was really great.
I also liked how Sabrina and her fiancé got into a fight, it's extremely realistic especially since she's pregnant.
The flashbacks were cool too. My favorite was probably the one when Lexi first met Chris :)
You managed to get almost everything that a book needs, just in the first chapter. I can't wait to read more :)

wow you always know how to leave your audience wanting more! sign of a great author/entertainer..that's what you do, you entertain your audience thouroughly

Wonderful ending to your series book 1, I look forward to your next series, awesome writing as always.

Great update this story keeps getting better , and better. She should have listened to what Nana was trying to say to her.

Another awesome update, I really love this story. I wonder how this all will turn out

Chris has a lot a work to do in order to win his woman back. Mike is smart and he has that all "I'm your first love" bit on his side while Chris only has the kids, I hope blondie gets his sexy redhead!

I read this and this is not how I had expected it to go. I mean I like what Mike has done that is sweet. I think that I am just the reader of this.

I had found this chapter an interesting read. Yes, I am into reading this and it is written quite well. Really.

Another wonderful update you write all the characters so well.

Another awesome update, oh what is going to happen in the morning? So loving this story great writing as always.

Awesome update, I like Chris in the story, I wonder if he will end up with Lexi by the end of your story. I'm rooting for him, love your story.

You are good at writing different turns and twists to your stories. Really. You are a great novelist. What do I mean by this? YOU have the ability to write ANYTHING AND EVERYTHING. REALLY.

Lexie must be having a premonition of what's to come like in the Reba one. This must be what nana was seeing in lexie and chris's future.

There is really so many elements to this story here that you have created. I am impressed that you can write about so many different elements. Yes, this IS a COMPLIMENT TO YOU. REALLY.

You do this amazing job of writting the communication that goes on between these two characters in this story and how they are with each other. You write as though I am watching it on television. YOU are a TRULY impressive writer. Why do I say that? Because the way that YOU write is very descriptive but not too much. The way that You write is quite well because it is done in such a way that the reader can feel the emotions and see what is happening. If that makes sense. I HONESTLY DON'T know if I will ever be a good writer like YOU ARE. Besides REALLY YOU ARE BEYOND GOOD. What do I mean by this? I am saying because you have conversation, emotion, and other elements to what You write and it is impressive how You do that. REALLY. SERIOUSLY. I wanted to let YOU know that because I Don't know if You see it Yourself in Your own work. REALLY.