|Reviews for The Unthinkable Nightmare|
| Naver 11/13/12 . chapter 1
Parting ways with the one you love always sad...
Hmm.. I almost imagine this with a second part. Good poem, continue to write. :)
| BookcraZzaY 6/7/12 . chapter 1
Is it weird I can vividly imagine the beginning for some reason? I love how you keep climbing higher though and the path is really deep...I imagine this impossible path and It's to hard and when you part ways I have feeling that the other person will follow the path but you won't
P.s the fork on the road reminds me of the ending of a movie with a guy standing at fork in the road and it ends with him just standing there with the audience not knowing which way he will choice (I think it's a famous movie but I don't remember the name it came in 2007 or 2003 or somewhere in the 200's)
Loveeee the poem!
| AppleCrumble 6/3/12 . chapter 1
Loved it. Your first line was just perfect, it outlines the poem and is perfect.
Loved this! :-D