Love it, I feel like she'll like the guy on the ship with her but I want her to be wanted by the metal mouth king and then slowly she starts to love him back. He should show jealousy and then of course they end up together :D hope this happens haha I love jealous moments

This is an amazing story. So lovely I can't wait for you to write more.

I LOVED it! The plot thickens! :D
Keep it up! You're doing great and I adore your work :D

I tried to log in, but it's not working...anyway, this was an awesome chapter! I've been reading your story since the beginning, and I really enjoy it. The ending to this chapter was perfect and I feel that the character has developed really well. I'm excited to read more! Update again soon!

ooooo now it is really getting interesting.. keep up the great work :D

I'm really enjoying this work, and I can't wait for the next update. Your characters are very creative.

So the second I saw the alert for this story I stopped my work and started reading the new chapter! You have no idea how glad I am you updated one of your stories :D
I love the new chapter ( I wish it was longer though)... I'm very curious to know what will happen next! This story is just great!
Keep up your amazing work! Waiting your new updates :)

AHHHHHH amazinggg - keep going and writing bc it is gettting good! can't wait for the next update :) keep up the good work!

OHMYGOD!
first of all I'm so glad you updated :D the chapter was amazing and left me wanting more :)
the king's last appearance left me wondering about his character... he seems like a cruel man and I didn't expect him to come after Dhalia :o
eee I really want to know what will happen next lol
can't wait for you to update! keep up your amazing work :D

Update soon! :)

OH now I know what the title means :)
Lovely and very creative :)
Great update by the way, can't wait to read next chapter :)
Keep up your amazing work :)

This is really confusing but hopefully next chapter would clear things up

Truly amazing! such a great imagination! I think I have the same questions as Dahlia... so many weird things are happening around her! hopefully the next chapters will give us the answers :)
keep up the wonderful work! :)

OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD! that was amazing! I love this chapter! :D
next chapter is going to be very interesting :D
I adore this story :)
keep up your amazing work :)

Oooh more troubles for poor Dahlia :/ it seems like everyone besides Oax (may his fictional soul rest in peace *wipe a tear*) wants to hurt her for something she has nothing to do with :(
Loved the new chapter :D keep up your amazing work :)