aw man its over i thought it was going to have more to it but oh well still good.

This is a pretty interesting world, and the Arabian-parallel shows through quite well. I hope to see more of these two soon.

I really liked this.

Both of the characters sound really hot from their descriptions. It was all rather sexy too. Definitely fun to read.

The setting seems intriguing. I'll be curious to see what else you end up doing. I know I'd love to see more of these two.

Good work!

This was a pretty interesting story. So this is not part of the World of Twilight? Regardless, thank you for giving us a new setting to the Anmyutsu Mythos and I would certainly like to see more of it in future stories.