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   BeyondEvolandGrace 6/6/12 . chapter 1I like all your poems. Alot. I like alot of things about them. :) |
| bookppl93 6/6/12 . chapter 1 i know it sounds stupid but.. thats really deep. |
| the-lovely-anomaly 6/6/12 . chapter 1 A tense, emotional scene you've captured here. I kind of wish there was more (so little is revealed and I'm curious as to what's going on), but in a way I don't think more is needed. This is one of those I'm conflicted about. I like it, but I'm conflicted about it. |
| surelynot 6/5/12 . chapter 1 I hope you're okay. Reading your work and some of the reviews left, I'm kinda worried for you. Please reach out to somebody if you're struggling to stand it - there are so many people willing to help. You are, by your work, a really clever, talented person - I admire your writing very much and I beg you, please, if you're in a dark place there are people who can help you. |
| we've got obsessions 6/4/12 . chapter 1 i love this. the repitition of the phrase "an accident" makes the whole thing so much more powerful. |
| my.life.is.over 6/3/12 . chapter 1 Okay. Ellie, you're starting to scare me. Please, please just talk to me. Please. |
| KatieMichelle 6/3/12 . chapter 1 Neat. I like the dialogue. You don't see that in too many other poems on FictionPress. |
