|Reviews for Lighter|
| Love A Mysterious Thing 7/9/12 . chapter 1
Not many who can see through a disguise that people put on to mask their pain and the way they torture themselves... But don't you hate where there are a few who see it and try to make you care for yourself? It's nice to feel like people care. I love it when they do... but then when they try to sympathize? It makes me sick. Or when they try to fix me... I'm such a hypocrite.
Anyway this was another amazing one but i have to say my greatest fear when i first read your writing was you encouraging others to do the same.. and in this you did just that. "I love ruining myself, it's just what I do. If you're hurting, you should try it, too." I didn't like that too much but the poem is still amazing. I love how you bolded the word bold too. It was almost comical in a way. Great write.
| bookppl93 6/4/12 . chapter 1