|Reviews for The Elder Song|
| Ellefisher 6/4/12 . chapter 1
Wow! This is really good. I found you had a lot of run on's though. Maybe you could fix'em with a comma? Unless it is a style thingy... But over all it was good!
| No account reveiw 6/4/12 . chapter 1
Curious indeed. Im confuzzld on what was happening in the first part with the criosphinx. PLEASE CONTINUE THAT PART!