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   hecountedstars 8/7/12 . chapter 6woah, not expecting this darkness at all. i feel like if i blink too quickly these haikus could fade away. intense snapshots, even without the context to understand them. your use of contrasting emotions works well with the series. |
| the-lovely-anomaly 7/30/12 . chapter 5 Aww, cute. :) |
| the-lovely-anomaly 7/30/12 . chapter 4 Wow, dark. But very realistic. |
| the-lovely-anomaly 6/22/12 . chapter 3 A little too similar to the last poem for my liking. Also, "you are forever mine" sounds a tad melodramatic in my opinion. Nevertheless, watermelon-flavored lips sound yummy! |
| the-lovely-anomaly 6/22/12 . chapter 2 Hahaha, yeah. Lips are lips, whether they're on a boy or a girl. I've tasted both so I know. ;) Mmm, cherry chapstick. Katy Perry reference? Or not? Either way, that sounds delicious. |
| the-lovely-anomaly 6/22/12 . chapter 1 Such a cute and sweet little image. I must admit I smirked as well. |
