|Reviews for pieces of us|
| hecountedstars 8/7/12 . chapter 6
woah, not expecting this darkness at all. i feel like if i blink too quickly these haikus could fade away. intense snapshots, even without the context to understand them. your use of contrasting emotions works well with the series.
| the-lovely-anomaly 7/30/12 . chapter 5
Aww, cute. :)
| the-lovely-anomaly 7/30/12 . chapter 4
Wow, dark. But very realistic.
| the-lovely-anomaly 6/22/12 . chapter 3
A little too similar to the last poem for my liking. Also, "you are forever mine" sounds a tad melodramatic in my opinion. Nevertheless, watermelon-flavored lips sound yummy!
| the-lovely-anomaly 6/22/12 . chapter 2
Hahaha, yeah. Lips are lips, whether they're on a boy or a girl. I've tasted both so I know. ;)
Mmm, cherry chapstick. Katy Perry reference? Or not? Either way, that sounds delicious.
| the-lovely-anomaly 6/22/12 . chapter 1
Such a cute and sweet little image. I must admit I smirked as well.