Reviews for Promises to Linger
Delilah Brightman 9/28/12 . chapter 1
I love how you painted a picture of the rain sweeping threw the town. And the nature! I love this.
Astraea Athena 6/21/12 . chapter 1
This is really beautiful you create such atmosphere with this poem it feels as if I'm really there watching the rain fall.
Mr Bellatrix Lestrange 6/12/12 . chapter 1
This was a nice poem because it was describing an event, and those kinds are the best, even if it is simply that of the rain and what kind of emotions it brings. As usual, your words are chosen carefully and fit the mood. "and urges the clouds to depart." would have to be my favourite part. Nice job.
Beth Brooks 6/10/12 . chapter 1
i love the picture your words paint! good job! and yea steamy summers all around!